[Timothy C. Tyler]

I looked again and did see some soft edges like on the shirt edge. This is good. Now think about how the lines behind the hands intersect with the stuff in front. The intersections must be soft too. The stuff in front gets right of way. Blur and soften the stuff behind it to help the hands come forth. Shadow colors: the cast shadows from the hands need to be more carefully defined, I feel, and different color than the fingers. Warm light, cool shadows. The warm/cool thing would help you too.