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Dear Tim
I love your work and enthusiasm for your technique. You are my kind of artist. Your values and color look good but try checking your drawing with some of the following.
-the humerous of the left arm looks long compared to her right arm.
-head size to body length check it. I know comic strip heroines tend to have longer bodies for head size which gives more of a heroic presentation, but is this what you were looking for?
-her right foot looks uncomfortable or unstable or unnatural which attracts too much attention.
Those are my main comments, I would have to get very, very picky to catch other recommeded items.
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