Mai Ly, your daughter is beautiful and the painting is coming along very nicely.
I only wonder about the highlight on the upper and lower lip. I am going to exaggerate now, it sort of looks like they are remnants of a milk mustache. Please don't be offended, I only mean to point out why it is bothering me. That light area seems to follow the lips continously and should be less noticeable. See if others agreee, before you make changes.
You accomplished the turn of the arm wonderfully and her hands below the sheer fabric turned out very nice as well.
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