Kim, I like the color better on the inside shots. The outside ones are the same temp. and there's a core shadow that's pretty hard to handle. I'm not sure the bare belly is needed, the form would say it all. The belly rather competes with the face and hands for attention for me. I think less may be more.
Outside, try to block reflected light and establish stronger shadows. The greens and background are pretty much moot I think.
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