[Mike McCarty]

I like Michele's post, and agree with the others regarding the bare belly. The suggestion of the belly would be just as effective.

I like the position of the head in the outdoor shot. The indoor head position is not very flattering around her chin. The outside pose shows her to be much more attractive.

What kind of camera and film are you using?

I always like to see what the image looks like without the background noise, reduce it to it's simplist form, for reference sake. Here's another rendition to complicate your mission.

I think you're doing pretty good for your first attempt!