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Old 03-04-2002, 02:43 PM   #5
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I like the great sketchy technique and the detail where necessary. My only criticism is not in the flesh tones. I think they are great. It is the shirt. There seems to be a lack of shadow on the right side, as there is on the face. It is a bit flat. The folds have shadow, but would a bit of shadow in the lighter blue on the right side give it more dimension?

Great job on a difficult task of painting someone you love.
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