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I really like the sculptural depth you've been able to capture in the hands and feet. Very nice.
I see two other areas that need some work, though. The first is the top part of her right arm as it goes into the sleeve. It should be angled more steeply to the left instead of being so vertical. The way it is now it looks as if her right shoulder is too far out to the right. If you just change the angle of that tiny triangle of upper arm that is visible above the forearm, it will read as it should (ie arm going up and off to the left, and shoulder in its correct position.)
The second thing is in the likeness. I don't see a reference photo in the photo critiques thread that shows her with a closed mouth as you've portrayed her here, but it seems as if the area between her mouth and chin is too big, making her seem much older.
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