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Old 08-25-2001, 11:56 PM   #2
Karin Wells Karin Wells is offline
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Your edges seem OK as far as I can see on such a small picture.

On my screen, the face detail is much cooler than in the larger picture...which is accurate?

The sitters proportions don't look right...the head seems too large and/or the shoulders and arms seem too small.

I don't object to the intensity of the highlight on the chair if the arm of the chair is meant to be highly reflective.

Overall, I feel that with a little more time and effort invested in this painting, you will have something quite nice.
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Last edited by Cynthia Daniel; 11-12-2001 at 08:55 PM.
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