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John, this is a vey nice first post, a very haunting and hamletic expression indeed.
I suggest that you have a look at the followings:
The body looks a little flat, specially it looks as there is a part of the trousers missing from behind.
Maybe you could also soften the edges against the background, to give it more volume.
In the face I think the upper lip is too dark and sharp,it contrasts with the eyes that are very expressive instead.
Good luck, keep us updated.
Ilaria
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