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Old 07-30-2004, 06:17 PM   #2
Allan Rahbek Allan Rahbek is offline
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Hi Julie,

This is a well chosen pose, I like it. You have done a great job.

The only critique I can offer would be to chek the shadow values. I think that you have made the values a little too contrasted in the nose(shadow) and the hair and hat in the right side. All and all you should dull down the shadows. There is so much life in the drawing overall so you will not loose anything by unifying the shadow sides a bit. That goes for the dress too.

Allan
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