[Tom Martinez]

This a second attempt to give you a critique. My first attempt was lengthy and the program didn't like my attachment for its size. Basically, I felt that your drawing was off a bit and felt that you could have created more form through the handling of your shading. I suggested reading "Drawing the Human Head", Burne Horgarth and getting a copy of Peggy Baumgaertner's tapes, they're a bit pricey but well worth it. Then, I attempted to give you an attachment. But, failed. Let's try again...