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Julie,
I love the feeling of movement in this piece and it has wonderful ethereal feel. The figure on the right feels "right" to me as is, but I don't understand the reason for the pulling of the ponytail. I think dropping the hand/arm of the middle person to break the connection with the hair will make a better composition. It will also make the 2nd person from the left a relevant part of the composition instead of being left out of the interplay between the 3 foreground figures as currently shown. Hope the comments help.
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