Jean, grate job! The hair brilliance in the shadow and on table is beautiful. I am sure you will give the hair in light on top the same shine, that special touch to give it more life. I love the hand and the top. Maybe a few softer edges on the rim of the hood. My I be bold and suggest unifying the hue in the face the cheek seems a bit strong on the chroma. I personally like the chroma on the nose but think the cheek is a tad to strong. What do you think? One more thing, the dip on the wing of the nose a touch to dark.
I hope that helps.
mischa
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