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Simon,
Nice composition and color arrangement. I think this works well in the abstract. The way you've placed the girls and dogs seems relaxed and natural, and I like their expressions.
The one thing (not to disagree with the previous suggestions, which are excellent) that stands out for me is the flatness of the light part of the girls' faces. There seems to be very little sculpting of form and variation of color. I would expect to see more light and color, and areas of highlight, in the light areas.
Alex
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