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Simon, I think you have tackled a complicate job, I mean trying to match a work you did a few years ago.
To me this would be extremely difficult, since working on groups of portrait is already problematic enough without trying to turn back the clock!
Regarding this particular work, I like the size and scale of it in the paper. There is always the usual dilemma, teeth yes or no, but it's a matter of personal taste. The portrait is fresh and sweet and the pose is dynamic and informal.
Technically, I am not sure about the size of the hands, to me they look slightly small compared to the size of the face (maybe reference distortion ?). Also I find that reinforcing the shadowing on her right side would make the head turn more.
Anyway it is a lovely drawing and I am sure your clients will be very satisfied
Ilaria
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