[Chris Saper]

Dear Jean,

I am so glad you are exploring new approaches in drawing that will work better for you!

I like what you have accomplished - just a couple of observations - the body looks too large for the head. It might be a result of some photo distortion.

Also, you might think about moving the right side of the dark vertical a bit more to our right so it doesn't form a tangent with the strap on the dress. I would hate to see you lose that little kiss of light between the body and arm, so I am not sure how far you could go with the vertical.

Good to see you here!