I like this drawing, too. I have no remarks on the edges. I would say that the shading in the face itself seems a little weak. It appears that you have not decided whether to stump it or to use lines for the subtle shading of the face. I like to use the broad sanded tip for shading of the face, and heartily recommend that you give it a try. You can achieve wonderful shading effects with just the sanded tip of the pencil. Perhaps your quest for softer edges would be realized if you utilized the sandpaper block.
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