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Old 01-17-2003, 05:31 PM   #1
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Military portrait




I would love some input with this composition. This is a 40" x 30" oil on canvas in progress - note the blocked in flag, hands holding a pair of glasses (that haven't been painted), and medals.

This portrait is of an AF ENT surgeon who has since passed. I have included the only reference photo I was given to use for this portrait.

I would like to incorporate either a few ENT books stacked on top of each other, an anatomy of the ear model, or an ENT head lamp (a large silver dome reflector on a thick white band that sits on the head- only ENT uses) to tie him to his otorhinolaryngology history. I would like to have one of these items on the desk next to him. I just don't want to make it too much. I'm moving more towards the ear model, but I hope it doesn't confuse the viewer as to why it's there or make the composition busy.

I lack the professional education background to know just how to "layout" but I'm learning as I go. I have typically gone with what looks good, but now I would really love a more educated opinion. I would really love for this portrait to look like a pro did this, but the fact of the matter is this is my first oil painting. I must say it's been a learning experience from the start! I really like the medium and I want to do more after this portrait is finished. Please tell me what you think - I would love any advice!
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