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Old 04-23-2004, 12:59 AM   #1
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One of my recent paintings - titled "Departure".
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Old 04-23-2004, 01:01 AM   #2
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Old 04-23-2004, 01:41 AM   #3
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Wow

Wonderful light in this one Jane. The message is in the pose. It tells the story of the title perfectly. I really enjoy looking at your work. Do you, perhaps, have some shots of any WIPs laying around you can post? Would love to see your process.

Thanks for sharing.

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Old 04-23-2004, 09:39 AM   #4
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Hi Jane,

It's good to see your work again. This is wonderful and strong - gorgeous skin tones, and I love the triangular composition.

You have a certain no-nonsense directness in your work that is very appealing.

How big is this, by the way?
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Old 04-23-2004, 09:54 AM   #5
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Gorgeous! A great example of a title being an essential part of the painting. Without that it would still be a beautiful image, though confusing. With this precise and simple title it has so much more power!
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Old 04-23-2004, 10:24 AM   #6
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Jane,

This is a powerful, provocative, and inspirational portrait. Your inventive interpretation of luminence and the color of light is masterful. I love your paintings and am so glad you are sharing this with us. This might as well be in the unveilings section.

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Old 04-23-2004, 06:31 PM   #7
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Geary - Thanks. I have only a shot that was about 3/4's done which I am posting - I made corrections on the head, worked further on the background, added light behind him to give more depth and glazed on the skin. Usually I begin with a sketch of oil or acrylic on the canvas - this one I actually drew out in charcoal because of all the striaght lines (which I have yet to master).

Linda - Thanks so much. The composition was a nice surprise - I was very excited to paint this when I saw the photo I had taken.

Michelle - I think youre right about the significance of the title and the painting. I also happened to have been painting it during the time one of my best friends passed away (not the person in the painting).

Garth - You have a wonderful way with words, that, although I don't deserve, I still think I will print out and paste on my computer for when I need some ego boosting. I guess posting isn't as scarey as I thought it would be...
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Old 04-25-2004, 12:53 PM   #8
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Jane,

Beautiful work! I love the color harmony, and you have done a wonderful job with reflected light and color in the shadows. Is this the gentleman I met?
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Old 04-25-2004, 03:05 PM   #9
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Thanks Chris! This is actually the son of my SO, the man you met. There is definitely a strong family resemblance, though.
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Old 04-25-2004, 03:55 PM   #10
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Hi Jane,

There is something very solid in the contrast of colors, with the Mauve background sky, or is it a wall? And the light Mauve in the shirt. It seem like all the colors are building up to support the skin colors.

And the Oleander. Wish I could live in a country where Oleanders grow.

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