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Old 12-13-2002, 11:57 AM   #6
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Clive,

I'll give you my dos pesos. I think the lady is a little hard to find in the composition for two reasons: first, the chair is very imposing and second, the broad scope of the composition.

I know these things can be to taste, but my taste goes for something like the following version. I've de-emphasized the arch of the chair arm on our right and darkened the chair on our left.

Once again this is just one guy's look.
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