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Old 03-04-2003, 08:11 AM   #12
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It's amazing to see how the changes you've made have brought the portrait together.

It looks to me like Nick's head has a bit of a pasted-in look. Putting in the shadow cast by his head onto his shirt, as in your reference photo, would tie them together better.
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