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Old 09-24-2004, 12:25 AM   #4
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Yep.

Thanks, Michele, for the feedback.

"The only area I think might need some work is the mom's face. I know the reference for that area isn't the best but I think in the painting it could use some more definition of the of the large turning planes of her head. It looks pretty flat right now. "

I'll change that. Your echoing others here. I didn't want it to be a double portrait. Was hoping I could get away with the face in shadow. Must model that face a little more. A bigger version can be seen at www.buildart.com.
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