Sample for a Dance magazine

[Julie Deane]

Hi -

A friend is giving me a full page ad in a dancer's vanity magazine. It's a black and white booklet paid for by the proud parents of dance students.

In return, I am using her daughter as a model. Here are some sample shots - am I on the right track? I personally like the one with only the upper torso - with the red/white/blue theme, but am not sure it will be "dance"- ey enough.

I have closeups of face/hands/feet etc for detail work, but am showing the three main poses to get some feedback. Thanks in advance!