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Old 09-05-2005, 06:43 PM   #2
Terri Ficenec Terri Ficenec is offline
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Hi Piety--
This is just lovely! The colors, the pose --very soothing and peaceful.

Two very small things that bother me a little:
--That little grey disc in the window on the upper left? (Not sure what it is, but it draws my eye over there)
-- The bottom right edge of her skirt appears to be outlined, perhaps that line could be softened/lost a bit just to the right of her shoe, where the skirt and floor seem to be similar values?

Again, Piety, this is beautiful. So nice to see you working in color!
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