Stephan

[Meredith Wagenknecht]

Willow,

Sorry to bother you again, but as I write this, I don't have your postings in front of me. As I went back, I noticed two more things which leaped out at me. First, in your drawing, the subject's mouth appears to be more open than in the reference photo. Also, in the photo, his shoulders aren't "square" to the viewer. His torso seems to be angled away from us, with his left (our right) shoulder farther away than the other. This results in us seeing more of his right shoulder, and less of his left. In your drawing, he seems more parallel to us, and I see equal amounts of his shoulders. Do you agree? Hope this helps! Take care.