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Hello Patricia,
You might try pushing her hair back away from his right eye a bit. I think this would help clarify his face a little more. Also, I would reduce the intensity of the dark line of her blouse. I've tried to make the hair adjustments with my crude editor. You could even go a little further and remove all the curls in front of his face. See what you think.
I agree about the highlights on and above her lip. I would reduce them ever so slightly.
Very nice job.
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