Fran & Terry, in progress

[Jeanine Jackson]

This is going to be wonderful!

I particularly like the way you have made his skin tones a value darker and less chromatic than hers.

For the smile, paint the teeth cylinder by making back teeth darker, and cast a shadow under the upper lip.

Avoid the clumsy foreshortening of the man's hand by sliding it down along her arm (not too far off the canvas!) and spread a few fingers.

Just my two cents on a million-dollar subject!