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Old 01-20-2003, 09:14 AM   #1
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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Joseph,

Lovely, lively, as good as any I have seen. It does not look timid or overworked. I love the movement of the hair.

One tiny thing. The eye on our right needs a little correction. Watch the drawing on the lower lid. The curve is a little off, Watch the drawing of the edge of that eye as it touches the edge of the face, again a tad off. The white on the bottom lid toward the nose is a bit strong and distracting. This is, at least for me, one of the trickiest parts of a 3/4 drawing. Otherwise a fabulous job!

Sincerely,
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