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Old 04-05-2002, 12:32 AM   #5
Lon Haverly Lon Haverly is offline
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I thoroughly like it, and see your point about the chin. You run the risk of overworking what looks to be a fresh and spontaneous drawing if you mess around with it too much. I would only suggest that if you want to change the chin, you could consider the following: look at her right ear and follow the colors you used from it to the chin. Do you see that the colors halfway to the chin work well. I would suggest continuing the lighter colors used from her right ear halfway to the chin on past the tip of the chin, over the dark reddish color.

What a lovely style, and I can see why the lady loves it!
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