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Old 11-03-2004, 11:42 AM   #5
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Michele and Kim - excellent eyes. The outer edge of the eye on our left does indeed need to go down, the mouth is askew and the mouth and chin need to be pushed back.

I have posted a close-up as well as the larger composition, 20" x 24", however I haven't figured out what to do with the large empty background yet. Also does the position of the arm holding her foot read awkward? Although this reference is Photoshopped, that is how she was holding it, I've only filled out the part of her arm a little above her knee and above her wrist to try and make it read better.

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