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Old 11-03-2004, 08:39 PM   #5
Linda Nelson Linda Nelson is offline
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Hi Amy! How ya doin!

Excellent work - congratulations.

There are only two things I'd change

- the highlight for the tip of the nose is up just a bit too high.

- the lower eyelid on the left (her right) looks a bit straight. It seems the other eye is larger than in the photo, but I wouldn't change it - it looks great, and is beautifully painted.

Oh one last thing - the hair that is front of the ear is more of a flat shape than the pointed that you have - but this is minor and I didn't notice before I looked at the photo.

Terrific job Amy!
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