Very nice portrait. The hair is especially well drawn, good values.
I would look at the highlight on the bridge of the nose. On your drawing it is placed about halfway between the two eye corners. It should be about 1/3 from the left and 2/3 to the right eye.
And I also think that a darker shadow on the back of the T-shirt would balance the fine contrast of the hair and background.
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