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Old 03-22-2005, 11:16 AM   #1
Patricia Joyce Patricia Joyce is offline
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I'm calling her done




Unless you have some suggestions that would not overwhelm me (ie scare me that I will RUIN this portrait) I am calling her done. I know there is so much that I don't like, but I am happy it holds together. In other words, there are two eyes, a nose, a mouth, an expression I like!!

It's the most I hoped for this being my first truly completed portrait in oils. I present it on April 2nd, so if anyone has desperate measures I should take to improve it, let me have at it!!

Thank you for looking and for all of your advice and support, which I take seriously.
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Old 03-22-2005, 11:27 AM   #2
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I've never presented a portrait without having some of those feelings you describe. Just keep them to yourself. Your client will be plenty happy, as there's plenty here to be happy about. So enjoy it--you've earned it.

As with most things in life that are worthwhile, I've found that what I was the most afraid of ended up being what I've come to look forward to.

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Old 03-22-2005, 11:55 AM   #3
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As with most things in life that are worthwhile, I've found that what I was the most afraid of ended up being what I've come to look forward to.
Wow, that goes into my quotes collection, Tom! And thank you for the vote of confidance! I will definately let you all know how it goes over after the 2nd. Bishop Pilla will be there....who knows?????? Well, I can dream big, can't I??
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Old 03-22-2005, 12:15 PM   #4
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It all fits extremely well. I agree with Tom, your client will be happy.

Congratulations on your good work.
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Old 03-22-2005, 02:11 PM   #5
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Thank you, for the compliment, John. Makes my day
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Old 03-22-2005, 07:50 PM   #6
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Hi Pat-- This turned out well! and you managed to soften her expression so subtly.
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Old 03-22-2005, 09:33 PM   #7
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Pat, I agree with the others, this turned out well. I especially like the chin coming out of the cowl (is that what to call it?) - it's like you can reach out and grab it. I'm looking forward to hearing how your presentation goes.
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