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Old 12-27-2005, 12:43 PM   #3
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Debra,

I too am very sorry to hear about your dad.

Your drawing is lovely - I agree that you should do something about the juncture of shoulder, collar, etc. to let the forward figure stay in front of the younger figure - in conjunction with the tip of the plane's wing, it creates a tangent that runs up to the cheeckbone of the younger figure..
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