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Old 07-19-2002, 07:09 PM   #5
Lon Haverly Lon Haverly is offline
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Nice work, Rendi! Such a good subject. Nice colors.

Perhaps I would have made the upper arm a bit shorter, and added the hand, and made the hand more complete than the photo indicates. It would add to the interest.

The eyes were a bit blurry in the original. Perhaps the lines of the eyes are not as clear in the image of your work. I cannot see the tear duct work or the fold of skin over the eye very well. These are details which are important to carefully define. It may be that the eye on the viewer's right may be a tiny bit larger than the other - I nit pick.

Overall, a very nice drawing, which which will be enjoyed for years to come.
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