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Old 09-03-2006, 10:56 AM   #7
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Hi Jean,

I've attached a modified version of your photo after using Photoshop's Levels and Brightness/Contrast controls. I don't think the lighting is a problem with this photo.

I'm not sure I like the facial expression or awkwardness of the shoulder and strap on our left, though. Just my opinion. Lovely model. Can you post some of the other shots you took?
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