Margaret, I like the way you use and combine your colors. The way you see things and how you represent them is interesting for me.
I have one suggestion that I believe can be considered. It is the length of her nose. Even thought the angle of the viewing point is as it is, I believe in reality the length of her nose is real but in proportion to her face. In this case it is to long and if you nudge the edge above the lip to shorten it just a tiny bit you would be better for it but not forgetting the angle of the viewing point. One more thing a line or two to indicate the circumference or the back of her head mite give your models head more structure.
All the best to you
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