Paul, I think the changes look good. The mans shoulder are almost facing us so should can be a touch bigger plus the length of space from shoulder to elbow needs attention. On the same side the jacket below the elbow can go out more.
Mischa,
Yes, now I look at it, his right elbow does look small. I think I didn't want to go off the canvas on that. I will make the changes and post again. I really appreciate your input.