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Old 04-15-2003, 08:47 AM   #1
Margaret Port Margaret Port is offline
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Hi Beth,

I like the scarf, It softens the mother and cuts out the large area of black. She also has lost her fierce look and now looks proud and maternal. Well done. I reckon she is finished except I think I would put a sleeve on her left arm.

The other area I think you should revisit is the symmetry of the girl's face and also her face is a bit too light. Nit, nit, nit, pick, pick, pick.
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