Portrait of a friend

[Mike McCarty]

I like your portrait a lot. I can see your "haunting" expression and understand your want to express it.

My first thought was that her shoulders are a bit too broad. As I look at the photo, without the complete shoulder reference, my eye tells me that you may have made them a bit too wide. It would seem that her somewhat narrow face might accompany a more slight figure. But these are just guesses.