Please critique

[Mark Gil]

I really appreciate your critique. This forum is a big help. The light source was a bright lamp. I never realized the collar running into the chin, the way it is, until now. I may need your advice on a commission I'm fixing to start on. The client wants a 20 x 24 portrait and all I'll have to work from is an 8 x 10 black and white photograph, about 45 years old. I may post it, half way done for opinions.

Thanks again,
Mark Gil