I have simplified the composition somewhat, mostly by cropping and massing the values. I have taken the values down on the candelabra and simplified the values on the drapery and vase.
I was aiming for dramatic lighting in this composition. I felt her striking youthful looks could support this strong side light. I may include some dress detail on the shadow side (it's in the reference photos when I print them lighter).
Thanks for the tip about the softbox or umbrella for fill, Marvin, for when I want a lower contrast ratio. I've been thinking about getting one of those.
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