A bridge too far

[Kimberly Dow]

These are lovely Mike - I only have one comment...
As a mother, I want to hand these two 14-year-olds some wet-naps and get them to wipe off some of the makeup. I am going to go glare at my 11-year-old daughter in the hope she will understand.

[Michele Rushworth]

Some lovely stuff, here Mike. My favorites are the various closeups, for the simple reason that their outfits (along with all that makeup that Kim mentioned) make these gorgeous fourteen year old's look as tough as nails.

On the shot with the extreme orange color, I concur with the other opinions above. Looks like a white balance problem to me. A tungsten setting with spot metering on one of the faces would have worked better, I think.

Would these models go for a reshoot? With some more classic clothing, some softer makeup and some variations in how the color of the light is handled by your camera on the interior shots you could have many, many jaw dropping portrait samples here.