Learning, learning...

[Michele Rushworth]

Try using just natural window light instead. The lamp was too bright and too close in the above photo, as you've already discovered.

[Jan Keeling]

Katherine, everyone has given great advice. I have been reading Roberta Carter Clark's book on Sharon's recommendation, and it is packed with helpful information.

But I just want to say... I think your drawing is beautiful, with a kind of Oriental feel, and if that were the look you were going for... well, I would simply say it is beautiful and successful!