Portrait Artist Forum    

Go Back   Portrait Artist Forum > Other Medium Critiques
FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search


 
 
Topic Tools Search this Topic Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 05-23-2002, 09:03 PM   #4
Linda Ciallelo Linda Ciallelo is offline
Juried Member
 
Linda Ciallelo's Avatar
 
Joined: Apr 2002
Location: Binghamton, NY
Posts: 247
Send a message via AIM to Linda Ciallelo
I just realized that the blue that I thought was the shirt was actually the skirt. Perhaps a slightly darker shadow line where the shirt meets the skirt would keep people, like me, from making that mistake. I thought, at first, that the blue was the shadow on the shirt, but it's a skirt. whew! I hope that's easier to understand than it is to say.

Also I noticed that the edge of the wall behind her is leaning sideways. I'm not sure what that is, but I think it would look better if it were straight up and down. Sometimes in photos things look that way, but if it's straight in real life, it should be straight on your painting.
  Reply With Quote
 


Currently Active Users Viewing this Topic: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

 

Make a Donation



Support the Forum by making a donation or ordering on Amazon through our search or book links..







All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:21 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.