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Old 06-15-2002, 12:11 PM   #1
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Dear Susan,

My quick comment is with regard to the tree, which looks like a design problem, for a couple of reasons: its value (too dark) and scale (same width as the head). The only other note I would make is that when little children smile (actually, when anyone smiles) the soft forms and chubby shapes temd to close up the eyes. So perhaps a less broad smile would be worth considering.

Chris

P.S. Yes, she is a cutie!
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