Pastel portrait, and my first post.

[James McDowell]

Thank you Garth for your input. I am having a problem getting a good photo. Rather, I should say that on my desktop computer the image looked pretty spot on, but now that I am looking at it on my laptop the contrast seems to high. To answer your question I think there is more detail apparent in the shadow areas than what shows here.
Thank you also for your input on the shirt. I think I will work on the shirt a bit more. Do you think that this portrait would have more balance if it was fully finished?

-James

[Alexandra Tyng]

Hi James,

Very nice! I like the balance of the composition, the control of values, the accuracy of proportion, and the way you've captured the expression and personality in the face. Glad to hear there is more variation within the dark areas. Sometimes this doesn't show up in photos.

I agree with Garth--I would like to see a tapering off of detail towards the bottom, maybe a suggestion of his hand and crossed arms. In some ways, "suggesting" form is harder to do than rendering it fully, so if you are uncomfortable attempting this in your first pastel, that's okay. It's not a question of talent so much as doing something umpteen times till it's second nature! In the end, the decision is yours.

Alex

[Lisa Ober]

Welcome, James. What a start! Excellent work in my opinion as well. You have your values down perfectly. Imagine what color will be like.

[James McDowell]

Thank you Alex. I will definately take your advice and suggest some of the arm and hand. I have always done portraits in graphite and I am very confident with that medium, so I understand what you mean about doing it upteen times.

Lisa, Thanks! I have a lot more experience with graphite so doing the portrait in black and white took a lot of pressure off. I am really excited to dive into color. I just need to find the perfect subject now.

-James

[Jimmie Arroyo]

Wow, first one? Great job, and the type of paper you used, did'nt think it would hold many layers.

I agree about the level of 'finish' on the shirt, it's always hard finding that point of 'completion'. Welcome to the forum, looking forward to more.

[Kimberly Dow]

Hey - another Texan!

Welcome to the forum James.

I like this, but I'd personally finish the bottom more as it seems too high to stop.

[Lacey Lewis]

I agree with what's been said above and wanted to add my welcome and kudos on this portrait.

I'm looking forward to seeing this finished!