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Old 01-12-2006, 01:32 PM   #1
Claudemir Bonfim Claudemir Bonfim is offline
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Originally Posted by Garth Herrick
I'm jealous, wishing I could paint her too. I can't wait to see what you do with this.

What a great beginning. You're inspired, I can tell.
It seems to me that Garth and I are posting together.
I can make the words mine too.

I'd recommend you to soften the glow on the lace, the lighting there is stronger than on her face. Well, that's just my opinion and of course I might be mistaken.
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Old 01-12-2006, 01:37 PM   #2
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Thanks, that is a good point. If the satin ribbon is too strong than it will detract. Right now the ribbon and the arms gracefully lead you up to her face. I don't want to create two focal points.
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