Devin,
I really like your drawing quality! I also would have mentioned about moving the faces closer together. Another thing is the signature. It may be better to move it closer to the figures. At this point it may stand out a bit, and distract from the flow of the piece.
I especially like the face that is to the viewer's right. It is a beautiful pose! And the flesh tones seem richer and warmer in that one.
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