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Old 02-21-2016, 05:24 PM   #1
John Crowther John Crowther is offline
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It's probably better than you realize. (An artist friend of mine once said he had a tendency to tinker with his work until he ruined it.) This has a lovely feel to it. If I were to make any suggestion, it would be that on my screen, at least, the baby' hand seems to disappear. Also, the waves in the bg would be better closer to horizontal and parallel.
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Old 02-21-2016, 09:01 PM   #2
Kimber Scott Kimber Scott is offline
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Thanks, John. The hands and arms aren't quite done. I do have the same tendency your friend has, tinker, tinker, sinker. I see what you mean about the waves. Not sure I'll make them horizontal, but I can see where they need to be parallel. Thanks, again!
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